Saturday, February 23, 2008

Original Story

~Kysa-chan on deviantART
Wweeeeeeeeeee!!!! This is the first time I posted here in a long time!! Anyways, I just tought I should post this. It's somewhat my very own original story that I'm still writing. Though it may take some time (because of school and stuff but that's only half the reason) since I have a HUGE writer's block, but I'll pull through. So, without further ado, here it is~


Chapter 1

"Success and failure"


"We did it! It's responding!", a seemingly joyful researcher shouted, "Yes! Congratulations everyone! It's a success!" another one exclaimed. Finally, they accomlished their goal: the creation of an ideal humanoid. A weapon for war, the machine that can conquer any land in a short period of time; no matter how large an amy is. It's ability to adapt in any environment and replicate any advanced armory shows it's great power to beome the strongest android alive.

It's appearance may look frail, but that's just an illusion to intimidate the enemy. It has the strength a million men or even more! Another ability that the ingenius researchers implanted was the humanoid's power to fly in the speed of light. It's wings are almost as half as robotic as the robor itself. The upper part is metallic and filled with circuitry, and has a glass window, containing a blue fliud connected by tubes. The lower part looks like angelic white feathers , or so it would seem. If activated, the harmless lightweight can transform into a deadly dart holding the most poisonous acid; even with just a scratch, your body will deteriorate in an hour.

But here is where it begins, in time the creation will continue to evovle endlessly. This marvelous invention has been modified and tested or many years and only this time, it has taken it's form. In a body of a young female.

As said, the scientists have been trying again and again to perfect the so-called 'Perfect Weapon' with the use of experimenting on children. But for the past years many of them died due to the scientist's harsh treatment and their insane need to reach their goal. After so much suffering, even some decided to give up their own children for the 'sake of evolution' so as they think. It was until when the head of the project decided to use his own daughter.

Now, many may be thinking that it can't be true that a father would use his daughter for his own reasons, but Professor Cedric Johnson thought otherwise. They were on the verge of a scientific breakthrough and the man decided that he had no choice: He will use Kysa, his own child as his final specimen. However, the only thing standing in between him and his last chance were his two sons: Christopher and Vincent.

To be continued

*PHEW* There, but that's just half of what I wrote so far. If you want to check out the rest of the story it's in my deviantart account. I'll be posting it sometime later on.

For more inquires contact me via email ad: kymsara_wiz@yahoo.com or you can check my profile here in my Blogger account. (I'll try to put in my URL for my deviantart account there or you can just click the link above this post)

Until we meet again! Oh, and before I forget, please if you guys could just give me any comments/advice to improve my writing it would be very much appreciated. Thanks!

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